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Who is more skilled at non-fiction writing?

April28
Dear Bear Grylls

You are better at writing non-fiction because you are more
realistic and he's a real explorer but Haydn Middleton is over dramatic and
his sentences do not make sense for example "The Me Factor " I mean why 
copy the X factor there really is no need but you you  take things to
the max.

You're the best writer I have ever seen. You're books are really 
interesting and Haydn Middleton is boring. so I hope you read this and 
reply within 48 hours. That's it for now. BYE

from 

Jamie-Ray 
Yr6 
Mersey primary academy
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Bear Grylls and Haydn Middleton

April28
Dear Bear Grylls
I an writing to say that I really like your books because of the description is really easy to visualise.  Since you do your stories based on real life I really like because you can see the ups and downs of your career. In Haydn Middleton’s  books you can not imagine what is happening.
In your books you have a extremely clear viewpoint. Also in the books you have pictures to show the difficulties what you went through. whereas in Hadyn Middleton doesn’t show the difficulties. Such as in the Dead Adventures you couldn’t see  what was simple and was difficult.
In your books you have a lot elaborations and you explain it fully.

your sincerely Abby

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The best contest by Mollie

April28

Dear Haydn Middleton,

In my choice I have chosen you for the best author out of you and Bear Grylls on behalf of your fabulous book “Dead Adventurous.” This is only because in your books you have miles more diagrams whereas Bear has 1 picture pair page. For example in your book there is a picture of a man with one leg sat on the sand and that is only one. Also their is a clear view point of the ups and downs of the real life story of dead adventurous to visualise what is happening. In addition to his books there is not a clear mood of the character or the setting. The front cover of your book made me choose you if I am totally honest with you because the humour really got me and I wanted to read more. Haydn your books are so funny and I would read more if I could. My favourite bit of the book is the part were you put ” It reminds me of the south wales in Britain.” Consistently you continue to inspire me with the humour.

Yours sincerely Mollie

xxxxxxxxxx

 

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Me as the Harlequin Poison Dart Frog By Jemma

April26

I am a Poison dart frog and I live in The Amazon. People think I am green to camouflage from predators but I do exactly the opposite. I make predators draw attention to me with brightly coloured skin. The bright colour serve as a warning to other animals that could be poisonous by doing this, this makes animals stay well away. I am golden arrow poison frog, for example, they have enough poison in its skin to kill over ten people!! But luckily I’m not one of them.

Did you know??

Some Amazonian Indians put poison from frogs and plants on their arrow tips when hunting in the forest !!

I go out hunting for food every morning I love bugs but I have to be careful on what bugs I eat. Due to tiny but deadly insects are every where in the rainforest. Mosquitoes carry many horrible diseases such as malaria and yellow fever, both of which can be deadly to humans also animals. Even though I carry poison and diseases, other animals carry different deadly threats. Which would not be good mixing with mine. To not get poisoned I need it gab them with the back of my hard tounge to squeeze the deadly threats out of them. Then after all that I can finally have my brecky for the day.

 

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me as a harlequin poison dart frog by amy

April26

I am a harlequin poison dark frog I live in the Amazon rainforest. there lots of us in this rainforest ; we are poisonous also camouflage so no predators  try to hunt us down. however some of them find us because we change colour so we can draw the other frogs attention that the frogs skin may be poisonous. we have enough poison in our skin to kill up to 10 people. so that is why most animals don’t try and kill us or eat us

we are safe in the Amazon rainforest but nothing really happens it can be a boring life but it does get interesting when animals try and eat us. we are not like normal frogs and camouflage into thing we are protective with each other. we have a brightly coloured skin. there is  no animal that like to eat us or try to kill us so we are perfectly safe and we are  rare in different types of rainforest. a golden arrow frog is one of the most dangerous frogs because not all other frogs have poison to kill other animal such as tiger lion and other dangerous animals and kill humans in 10 minuets or less.

I would say we are lucky creators but today we killed a lion but we hunt them differently we jump on them  and bit them and in 10 minutes they faint and then we just go back to our home like it didn’t even happen.

did you know???????

some Amzonian Indian put poison form frogs or plants on their tips when hunting in the rainforest.

 

 

 

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island by Matthew

April23

Dear home me and columbas are finally at the island and have found some strange delicacies which seem to be tasty and delicious after trying some samples but they seem to be exceedingly rare. columbas is determined to collect as many as possible but can’t seem to get them we have both searched all over it seems to that the villagers might have taken them and hid them, after all columbas is quite scary because of his face.

We have decided to name most off them when the ones which we have discovered we do not yet know if their is any more delicacies or any gold. I seem to get along with the villagers but is it just crazy columbas they don’t get along with. If we could have more people come over to search for more food that would be great.

P.S make sure they are not scary!

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A letter home ( Dead Adventures )

April23
25 March 15
Dear Home,
I have discovered India with my trusty pal Columbus. We discovered Indians 
watch out though there cannibals! We also discovered many delicacies like 
cocoa and tobacco.

Columbus is a very trusty man after all he saved my life after a Viking
tried to kill me with his bare hands. My brother and trustworthy family I
will be home soon not now though. That's all for now bye

Jamie
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Review of Lost To John Lockyer By Charlie

April23

It was …

GREAT no AWESOME!!! The only thing I didn’t understand was Umbro and what he is going to do next – please write a sequel to Lost so I know what is going to happen. By the way I have a title for the sequel called Found as Valdez has been rescued and “FOUND” by Sera. My favourite part most probably was when the eelbird kept bouncing on Valdez while he was gasping for breath in the pool OR when their was the shock-spined red bear that casually walked into the cave and just helped itself to his stone safe and just dozed off.

P.S

MAKE A SEQUEL!!!!!

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Dear John Lockyer

April23

Lost was an amazing book (especially the wacky but fantastic ending)the beginning was action packed when the shuttle lost control and crashed straight into the muddy swamp/steam vent area. How did Umbro escape so quickly? It was amazing how Valdez survived the crash and managed to keep alive from the eel bird , gorilla hybrid and the electronic red colossal hedgehog thing without even getting bitten or shocked or paralysed from all these extremely wacky creatures that Umbro apparently let loose on the planet of Eco. The ending was extremely mind boggling as you were given absolutely loads of information all at once in a big cluster. Especially when you find out that Sera isn’t the evil person and Umbro has been all along. Another weird thing is that the antidote to the chaos is the worlds tiniest thing in the centre of some handy metal tool and it can save the entire world with just a few drops. I would love you to make a sequel to Lost.

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queen spy

April16

what age and height was he  and the cooler you see we need all the idea of him so it will be easer to catch him did you have a theory  of who would do this or have any thing against you to do so . As we have take some people in a interrogation room and would like you to come on Friday , to see if any look like the person who broke in to your property last week .  Again we are very sorry about the time it has taken this long to do it there again we have been busied this past week and know one is been able to see you and today was the fastest we could .

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