Year 6

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guided reading session by Chloe McAllister

March26

The village is very small but that is also very good because it is all closed in so its like private! also it doesn’t really need to be big seen as though they aren’t really many people in it well who live there permanently anyway. Bruno also cannot have a small space because if he does then he might be able to escape which will not be very good it will be  very upsetting for Roxanne as well and she will be in bits but before they got the bear it  did not apply for them!

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how is the quaint and small? by amy and jemma

March26

The village is really small but that is good thing because then people know each other and they have a good relationship with most of the people. As a result of the people-who live in the quaint village- know each other they act like family to each other. this village is small so people know everyone in the village and all the time people in the village is kind to all the people who live there. The impacted on the characters is that they are seeing the same people everyday. And that is not good for them…

seeing the same people all the time may get a bit boring now and again but at least they leanering more about each other.

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Dancing Bear By Jack And Bethany

March26

Considering the village being small and only having a tiny amount of environment,nearly everybody in the community wants to help out;they want a better place to live in, as they all have bonded for many years. The village (which needs to be improved) has thousands of people walking across to keep up the chance of having a countryside.Due to Roxanne and Bruno building a strong relationship- many others in the cottage all have relationships with their closest companions. Roxanne, who has a dancing bear called Bruno, would like to help out the local residents in which will make a difference to the peaceful village. Starteled with different moments, Roxxane wants to have the best for the residents in need which help out the village due to this all of the people who live there will be extremely greatful because of the

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Dancing bear by Sophie fairpo

March26

The village that Roxanne lives in is a small place but the people who live there love it were others don’t. sparkling lights that  are all around the church this leads to it looking really nice  at night time.

due to the villige bean very quiet it makes the reader  feel like it would be a grate place to go and it makes it feel boring that there is not a lot to do while you are there this gives us the impretion that it would be ok to go and live there also there is a lovely brown bear which is called Bruno.

many would loveto see the lovable bear  so they can strok his soft furr wich is soft like a pillow and a blancit or fluth that like there would be funto do it but also boring as well as it would fun .

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Finding a friend by beth sellers

March26

That Alice missis home and she is not used to other people like new people. Alice just missis her brother because he is at the doctors she just loves him so much. Alice just doesn’t  wont any think to happen to him so she is other protective of him.

She is very shy as well she doesn’t  like new people that have just son up with out notists. She doesn’t  like coming out of her room she only dose when she is hungry. she doesn’t like sosullising with other people apesly strangers like you Alice is very shy of new people she doesn’t like tacking until she nows you a bit more.

 

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Valdez: Consultation

March26
As the patient awaked he told me that he remembered finding a dangerous vegetable ( of which he gave me  a detailed description) and cooking it on the steam vents nearby he tasted it and it tasted like all the qualities of a pizza.  After that he then recounted of collecting more of the fruit repeating the procedure and then slowly feeling his stomach churn and then he all of a sudden vomited and then fainted just waking up 30 seconds before I arrived on the scene. My medical advice for him would be to stick to the blue sweet fronds and salty nuts for a week before having a maximum of 7 ‘pizzas’ per week. His recovery treatment is to stay in bed and as soon as possible to get back out there and find more food for himself and try and stay hidden and out of creatures sights whilst recovering if possible(such as hybrids and hair pullers). Surprisingly, Valdez’s diagnosis is food poisoning either from the vegetable or from the water/steam that he cooked the mysterious food on. When he fainted he was lucky that he did not fall into the steaming hot water and die or fracture his skull /damage his spine when he fell otherwise he really would be in trouble when there is nobody around him.
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Valdez’s diagnosis by charlie

March26

The patient has quoted that their symptoms were a strange agonizing sensation in their stomach and then vomited countless times before becoming unconscious. My predicted diagnosis is food poisoning. Because they have also said they were eating unknown vegetables in untested bubbling water in a swamp covered in silica ponds and heated rocks on a plateau mountain. I would recommend a diet of safe, edible food to avoid this again or check your digestive system alterations.

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Is Nat suitable for his new role?

March20

Nat Cobbley is suitable for his new role because he loves to sing and fight thieves/villains and other things ; he’s a brilliant protector he’s the EFP (Edward’s Family Protector) plus because he has a new role to sing. Also he can sing as far as he can hold his breath. from night till day from day till night he can sing and fight villians as apose to being a wait ; he sings and fights villians.

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Is nat suitible for his new role? By Mollie and James

March20

I would argue that Nat is suitable for his new role because he stopped a world wide criminal from stealing all over the world. If he hadn’t of stopped him then he would of gone to every country, city, town, village, house or estate and stolen everything they had. To be honest he is a hero towards the whole wide world and saved valuable or maybe sentimental property. I would recommend him to Alderman Coote because he could be a great hand to help. On the other hand he would not be my favourite to recommend because he is too fat and easily gets drunk. For example ”    

 

 

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Is Nat suitable for his new role? by Jamie-Ray Lill

March20

I would argue Nat is not suitable  because he may want to stop Giles Petit but he’s to fat and gets drunk easily. This gives the impression that he can not stop Giles Petit especially if he goes in or near a pub he might get drunk or see a beer and he may grab one or two. Also Nat is very aggressive when drunk. Even though Nat is very creative he may be very drunk while coming up with a plan to stop Giles Petit. Giles Petit, one of the worlds worst criminals, Nat may not be able to stop him.

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