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February14

As the boy walked along the street , the dragon , known as Charlie , stirred restlessly. Charlie tried to get out with all his might , nothing was working . He was a raging bull squirming about . All of a sudden , he heard a door slam close he was trapped in the football locker room ! He had to get out before the game started . Luckily he found a loose stitch in the pocket . He tugged and pulled and managed to get out . He ran out of the room , the football field was as large as the moon . He flew away waving to the crowd.

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The dark cave.

February14

The air was filled with darkness in the damp cave. Drips of ice cold water dropped from the stone ceiling. The floor was a carpet of ice, waiting for somebody the set foot on it. Deeper into the cave it becomes more darker. At the very bottom of the darkness there is a smaller cave. Not any cave. It holds many amazing things such as: oceion blue crystals and stalagmites.

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Hi

February14

 

As I walked down the street,the little dragon in her pocket stirred restlessly and blew a huge fire ball,while its spikey tail crashed and bashed inside the giant pocket . All of a sudden it flew to its parents and raided the full town however the mini girl called Emma still loved and owned the dragon as well as that she had the time of her life when she reigned the land.Day after day each country was gone and full of dragons had a new fresh land and more prescious and want to eat Logan however Logan had solid protection.

 

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Macie

February14

As she walked down the street  the tiny dragon in her pocket was stirring  restlessly . But she did not know what to do because it was just stirring,  not doing anything and also when she walked she heard a noise complaint ,CRASH!,STOMP!,BANG!the noise kept on growing and growing,she didn’t know when it would stop until it got up to the top of the clouds.He got on top of the clouds and as he was slipping down  off the cloud they could when the up and down and the drying flow down  like a flock of birds.

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Blog challenge

February14

As she walked along the street,the tiny dragon in her pocket stirred restlessly. The dragon was squirming  and wriggling about like a snake .She slowly walked down the street hoping that no one would stare but the they did .Suddnly the young dragon started screeching making more and more people stare .As soon as she got home she took she miniature dragon out her pocket .As she did the dragon stood their waddling like a soulles penguin.When Suddnly it started to GROW!And GROW!AndGROW and it wouldn’t stop however much his owner tried to stop him.What could be happening to him?

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I can continue a story

February14

As she walked along the street, the tiny dragon in her pocket stirred restlessly…

“Hush Fadrid hush! We’re almost home.” Whispered the girl, just a week ago she found what she thought was a lizard on the street but when she got a closer look, it was a dragon, a baby dragon. She had great science and engineering skills and she had managed to make a shoe box fire proof, but even so, he was getting bigger and she had no idea what would happen when he was an adult. It was lucky that she only had a week left of college because then she can move to the country side and hide him, but for how long?…

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Pertronas

February14

Patronas is a mysterious , thrilling book which leaves you on the end of your seat ! Baba is a young girl about 12 years of age she has to lead her tribe to find water . It’s not easy though . Her one blue one black eyes made her become the next Baba leader of the tribe . One day Baba is sat near the rocks not far from the camp (in the desert ) when she sees a wavy patch of sand ,like a heat wave or a hallucination from lack of water . But as Baba moves closer she sees a city with trees and most likely water !

Near its side there was a stone engraved  petronas . As Baba ventured thurher she saw cool , luxoious , endless water . A few days later the group moved into petronas .

As the story goes on more weird things go on in petronas , someone asked for fruit trees the next day they find fruit trees , someone asked for fire wood the next day her assistant Tulsi finds a dry tree perfect for fire wood , A few weeks later Babas cousin Tai goes missing and is found in the eastern part of the city in a deep sleeping trance she does not wake up for a few days and even so when she does she will not speak ! Later in the week Merti , the goat tender , goes missing and he is also found in the eastern part of the city in the same sleeping trance .

Tulsi becomes suspious  , so do other people . Secrets and rumours come along to petronas ” Baba ” her mum Anda says ” This is not the desert way !!!!!!!!!! ” 

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Lola and her dragon

February14

As she walked along the street , the tiny dragon stirred restlessly. His dragon breath causing a cloud of smoke lingering in the air after falling asleep in her cosy pocket . Lola reached for the door handle and without a sound tiptoed up to her room . She placed the tiny dragon in the cage . ” I will call you Tiny ” She said before climbing in to bed for another sleepy night . As the night went on , a sound woke Lola from her slumber … She could hear small tiny feet coming from outside .Whithout  a thought she switched her light on and rushed to Tiny’s cage…..

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Dragon in the pocket

February14

As she walked along the street,the tiny dragon in her pocket stirred restlessly at the sight of a rainbow coloured lizard who looked a bit lost.They went over to see what the problem was with this incredible creature and he had lost his mum so they went on a adventurous hunt to find its mum.After a couple of hours they just give up so they were strolling back and they saw a multicoloured  tail which was a rainbow coming out of the bush and it was the mum.The lizard was pleased to see his mum..They went happily went skipping home.

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A summary of the book ‘petronas’

February14

Recently my guided reading group, group four, have been reading a book called petronas. This is my (personal) summary of the book.

This book is about a girl called baba. (Yes it’s a funny name) who lives in the desert as leader as a group of nomads. She is twelve years old. As the girl is moving the camp onwards in search for a spring or seep of water the can use. They set up camp in a dry river. While baba is in her own secluded area behind some rocks, she discovers a patch of wavy sand. When she steps in it the whole world changes and she finds herself in a new place. The petronas. The petronas has everything they lack, water, fruit and good, real houses (the nomads sleep in tents.)

She thinks this is the perfect place to set up shop. Perminantly. So she decides to move all the nomads to the petronas even though her mother advises against it. While in the petronas they discover fruit trees and other wonderful things. But after a little while when babas cousin goes out to pick fruit and falls ill. This illness is like a death sleep and nobody knew how to cure such a thing. They knew nothing of the petronas exept it was deserted and it had everything they could wish for.

a little while afterwards a boy named merti disappeared. When they found him he was in this death like sleep too.

later on baba saw a bird. She chased after it yelling at it to stop. It did so and chased after her.

she ran to her parents house and her father didn’t believe her so she left.

then the next day tai, the first sickness victim woke up. But she couldn’t move or speak.

 

this is as far in the story as we have gotten so far.

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