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The Highwayman’s Revenge From page 46 to the end different point of view (Zac’s) By Jemma

January16

My mouth twitched. A flicker crossed my face. I knew what the glove as doing to me so suddenly I looked at the glove and roared, “Argh! What is happening?” I started to hit my hand with my other fist. “Something is biting me!” I snatched up a stick from the ground and thrust one end inside of me glove. “I will not take it off! I will not take it off! I will not! I will not!

Just then Dillon shouted. “Is it now when we run, Shona?” I wheeled round and rushed to the back of the tree. Dillon was perched up in the hollow, looking eager for the game to begin. For a second, Zac hung there by the glove, then came the THWUK as his hand pulled free and fell to the ground.

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The Highwaymans Revenge By Chloe

January16

My mouth twitched. A flicker crossed my face. Suddenly, I looked at the glove and roared, “Argh! What is happening?” I began hitting my arm with the thist of my other hand. “Something is biting me!” I snatched up a stick from the ground and thrust one end inside my glove. “I will not take it off. I will not take off! I will not! I will not!” I moaned.  The pain, the pain!” I panted, my whole face contorted in agony.

Just then Dillon shouted. “is it now when we run, shona?” I wheeled round and rushed to the back of the tree. Dillon was perched up in the hollow, looking eager for the game to begin. Panic thrilled through shona. It had all gone wrong she thought. I jumped up at the tree, my gloved arm into the hollow. “Argh!” Dillon screamed. “What’s the matter with Zac? He’s  doing a horrid face at me!”

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should koro be a good leader by amy

January15

koro is wondering if he could make it to be co leader of the big group .koro some time could be really kind but he can get mad really easly.he should be a co leader because he can be kind and thought full . However he can get in a mood and start doing  things  he shouldn’t. so what do you think should he be a co leader?

koro should be a co leader because he saved kura when she fell in the the cold water and she could not swim and there also could be sharks to eat her up but if koro wans’t there she could of died . “I didn’t make it ” and koro was risking he’s life for hers and he put his life in dangenger.in addition he always goes to the leader and the leader always tells him what he should do if he turn co leader,so he knows what to do.

he shouldn’t be co leader because when he rescued kura he got really mad but he should of been proud  of his self that he saved her in the cold water. also at times he can get really mad about little things and can be really dramatic about it.

so what do you think should he be a co leader for the group or not?

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descriptionon bron the bear by Luke

January13

Bron is a bear which knows no laws he only knows survival and death . This no ordinary bear, this is bear where he can talk CRAZY !!!!! bron has a tough life but it doesn’t matter because he has razor sharp teeth and deadly claws so beware.

Although bears catch fish this one eats anything and he climbs trees AWWWSOME!!!!! his life was up in a forest until he fell down and crashed on the bed of a grass land he is fuzzy and that helps to camouflage

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Is Aman a suitable role model?By Kira

January13

Aman is a suitable role model because he thinks that it is wrong to destroy peoples homes and sacred landmarks that have been in his and other peoples country from when their founders were there. On the other hand, he did steal from a public place and its people that are trying hard to make a living in a deserted place with barely anything to keep them alive. But he and his pet dog Shadow( also known as Polly) did save a squad of soldiers from dying because of the bomb that had been planted on the bridge to the small village in Afghanistan. Consequently of stealing the apple he let his poor mother take the blame for it even though she had nothing to do with it.Aman also threw rocks at Shadow first in the cave and they could have broken her legs or her bones. Aman was also quite disrespectful to the man who brought them warm food and let them stay in a room for one night plus, he let them keep the dog instead of them having to hide her. Because Aman ran away with his mum and dog they had to turn to a random stranger instead which could have turned them in instead of helping them.

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Is Aman a suitable role model for children?

January13

WELL WHAT DO YOU THINK? He is not because he stole an apple from a market although he saved many lives with help of his pet dog,  Shadow  (Known as Polly by the RAF) by sniffing out a roadside bomb near a village in Afghanistan so he may appeal to children as a policeman/Fireman. Even if he stole an apple his mother would always help him and even took the blame of the fruit-napping and was tortured in prison by a Taliban police officer ( a corrupt man who is destroying the Hazara’s culture)!

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Christmas holiday by Daniel

January4

In the Christmas holidays me and all my friends had a lot of fun because we was at my freinds house and we sometimes decided to go outside on our bikes.when we went out on our bikes we went to the park but when we got there my friend’s tire popped so we had to help him carry the bike to his house then his mum put another tire on then we went back to the park.I also got a iPad air for Christmas this is what I am writing on

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LORD OF THE RINGS BY matthew

January4

Glittering on water, the sun shone  as bright as fire. As the tow boys found the ring they fainted with glee. As dwarfs come in his he was startled or so he though.

Been startled the hobbit lashed out with anger as the price dwarf strolled in fearless. Knowing the hobbit was the right one he asked “Will you help us on our quest?” Accompanying them the hobbit wondered what would be in the forest of Doom.

As the follower fell into a cave the dwarfs wondered where he was. Down in the cave the hobbit found Golem’s ring as spiders wondered in. Reacting quickly the hobbit put the ring and became invisible when a anxious roar ran through the cave and pushed the spiders away.

 After the spiders ran away a strange creature named Golem an in. Once the hobbit tuck of his ring ,Golem attempted to attack him, as soon as the hobbit got his freedom Golem tuck him to ruins directly above a volcano were he met the dwarfs looking down at the lave since it didn’t have any sort of floor.

Since the dwarfs was accompanying the hobbit, Golem was as terrified as a mouse in a mouse trap. Unfortunately Golem was able to get the lord ring but seemed to forget the ruins was behind him. Fortunately enough for the dwarfs Golem was more dumb than a pidgin with a seed sized brain. Since he was startled he stepped back and fell into the lave with the ring behind him!       

 

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Our Assembley

January4

Today we had a very interesting assembly. Recently  there was a new family who came to our school. They’re from different countries. John showed us a power point on were they was from which was Congo were a war was held.  People were trying to steal Diamonds gold and coltan. This was a good but bad opportunity  good because they will get water and food but bad because they don’t know the language so they struggled to make friends. It wasn’t long till they made friends. It is still hard because they aren’t fully English. But they have fitted in very well. They have made many friends hopefully they will be luckier in the future.

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Aracknaphobia

January4

Most people would agree that spiders are horrible creatures. Especially sally the girl who was terrified of any spiders. She had arattnaphobia, yet she liked other creatures. Sally tended to get a sweeping brush every morning just to get away the webs.

Then out of no were, a stranger in black through millions of spiders on her . The spiders(that were hairy) frightened poor Sally . “Get away!” she yelled pulling the spiders off her. “Who?…” she wondered “Who through those spiders on me?”. She questioned herself.

Finding herself in a dark black alley, made her feel uncomfortable. Sally heard something. She felt her friend was accompanying her. Sally’s bag fell to the floor. She froze , she turned , she looked. The spider was quick , quick because it had eight legs.

Sally ran quickly , telling herself she must not look back. Walking at a slow pace , she saw a ominous glow in the distance . She ran to pick it up, it was a ring and it said that it could change the world. She carefully placed it on her finger and all was silent. A ring had changed everything!

This meant that she could live without a fear. “NO MORE SPIDERS!” shouted sally “what a day it has been”.

 

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